Deliver: Hypertext narrative (draft 2)

Iterative improvement is the key to good design. Now that you have peer feedback, tweak, change, and improve your work. Re-read your story and identify where you might be able to further develop characters, increase tension and drama, introduce dialogue, alter story pacing, smooth out awkward transitions, etc.

In this draft, consider the role of style and emerging techniques in your narrative. See examples here.

Instructions

1. Review your feedback for the hypertext narrative.
   1. If you are unsure about how feedback works, please see these guidelines.
2. Reflect on how your work can be improved. Analyze, interpret, and apply relevant feedback to improve the project.
3. Record the changes that you made to the hypertext narrative.
4. Publish the HTML file.

Post work to the Studio

Use the exact indicated file format. You must obtain prior approval to deviate from these upload requirements.

1. Change Log: Upload a short description about the changes and improvements that were made in changelog.doc format.
2. HTML: Upload the exported Twine .html file (or .zip file if you have multiple assets).